Wednesday, February 5, 2014

should all freshmen live in campus sites?

Draft
1.    INTRO
A.    Hook: Do you ever dream of attending college and enjoy what people say a ‘’campus life”?
B.    Motion(meaning):campus housing better fits the purpose of university education, to teach people academics but also social skills
                                                                              i.         Academics important b/c many people attend university because they want academic learning
                                                                            ii.         Social skills---students one day have to graduate and to survive as a salary men or to get a job with some kind of human interaction, they need these skills.
C.    Definition: When we say university campus housing- living campus grounds and by freshmen- 1st year of college
2.    OUTLINE
A.    Join a new community
B.    Academics
C.    Economics
3.    ARGUMENTS
A.    Be in a new community
                        i.         Premise: You will be accepted to a new community
                       ii.         Hypothesis: If students live in university campus housing, they will meet new people and will join university community
                      iii.         Reasoning: Join university community-meet new people- meet someone who might help you later in life-graduate-get a job- meet that person- get help
1.     Example—mark zukerberg---live in dorm and communicated with other roommates and got idea of facebook—Meet many people with many ideas
2.     Can have fun
3.     Make new friends
A.    Make important relations
                                                   i.         Maybe helpful for “adult life”
B.    Social skills
                                                   i.         How to live as an adult and know others’ feelings
                                                  ii.         By social skills, we mean understanding others emotions
B.    Can focus more on studying
                        i.         Premise: University has educational support for students
                       ii.         Hypothesis: If students live in university-provided dorms, they will be able to have more time to get educational support that the university provides
                      iii.         Reasoning: Live in dorms-closer to supports dept or tutoring dept/ have more time to access them-get that help-learn better-this is achieving the ultimate goal of university, to educate people-students can study in better environment- can focus more on studying-(get better grades, better job)
4.    CONCLUSION
A.    Summary
                        i.         How college life w/ dorms can be better in future life in terms of relationships
                       ii.         How dorms can help students focus better
B.    Motion/position

                        i.         Therefore we believe all freshmen should live in university housing and so that the motion stands.

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